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Jam Fest 2012 Double Bass

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The final ad I did for an event called Jam Fest. I used type to illustrate a Double Bass. Leave a comment to let me know some pointers or tips or something I could change about it to make it better.
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That bottom-left line for the bass still looks off to me. D: Also, it's a bit too dim (sort of fades into the background). You did fill out the bass fairly well though, it has substance.

"Jam Fest" text looks like you couldn't decide whether or not to center it like the rest of the text. Line spacing for the rest of the text is a bit off as well, not very consistent.

Uneven border annoys me a little, but that may just be preference.

I do like the color palatte, as with the other posters.