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Time Warner Advertisement

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This advertisement was created in Adobe Illustrator, Photoshop and InDesign. The images and background were created with vector art in Illustrator and then brought into Photoshop for the creation of holographic images and the texture. The orange glow in the background was a simple brush that was used. The text was placed in InDesign using a layout grid format. I would like to hear your comments or critiques in upgrading this current advertisement as well as learning new things to improve my future works.
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I like the overall layout, concept and color scheme. There are a lot of small details that could be slightly improved, at least from my pov.

1. Where it says, "Time Warner offers media sources such as:" the list could be made smoother by listing the network names from longest to shortest. This upside-down staircase is easier to track and gently leads into the two blocks of text right of it.
2. The CNN frame seems to pierce into the rightmost text block. All other frames appear to respect a margin.
3. If feels like every one of the panels dancing across the middle should have an image of some sort on them, either like the current ones which have a capture of the network or at least the logos for all of the listed networks. Ignoring the two first and two last panels, there are the right amount of panels to do so.

I know it seems like a lot of negativity, but really those small details can make a large difference.